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# A few shorter verses

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General poetry without much of a name:

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```
Some time soon

Sweat and 

You’re gonna find love

you won’t know what to do.

Bass sends those shivers

up and down down

lips begin their quiver.

I’ll know.

You’ll know, just what to do.
```

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```
You know it's like

Everything else is resistible

covering years up with tears

I'm invincible.
```

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Just a few nameless bits.

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I’m letting my poetic side blossom after a decade and more of silence. I can’t promise it’ll ever be anything good here. Except me 😉

I’m Jack Lhasa

You are Amazing

👊🏼👊🏼Solidarity👊🏼👊🏼

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*Looking across Ilargia Base.*

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