--- type: "article" title: "We Are More.." summary: "An Attempt at poetry..\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\nKind of like poetry, but lacking the real beauty. \nThis was inspired by by this post, by . \nI’m a sucker for inspiration, where ever it strikes.\n\n\nTo your note on survival:\nSurvival is not a goal. It's not a temporary condition. Surviving is the Rock bottom. It's the very least a human can do.\nIf ever survival should be seen as a virtue, we are in dire times indeed.\nOscar Wilde once said that patience was a virtue, only in those with no other.\nSurvival is the same. Its only help is when you are crawling in the trenches or ditches.\nIf we come to value survival and patience as worthy parts of life, we are already doomed.\nTo be better. That is the only mandate laid upon a child, at the moment if birth. It is far from asking too much. It is the duty of each human, whether they live long, or die short, to be better.\nBetter than those who came before us.\nThere are so many who'd be content to occupy that same rung. The rung of their fathers. Stagnation is the killer of root and tradition.\nThe desire to surpass, to be better, to grow, is never without its merit and its hardened times.\n\nhttps://substack.com/@mshirley36/note/c-223164321\nSubscribe\nI offer to teach poetry. To help make a child into a person who can cite odd verses in uncomfortable times. And make their own beautiful words, when they realize that all we have to pass on to the them is this; the very last form of nonphysical, nondigital expression. \nThe verse above, has not been edited. It is as it was as I typed it. I strongly recommend both my students as and my peers to never publish a first draft. \nHowever, the fact that this rolled off my tongue, in that odd meter, is worthy of note.\n\n\nI’d like to thank for providing the impetus for this piece, and also , for reminding me that the ability to create good verse was still within me.\n\nShare\nIf you enjoyed this, or would just like to make sure I can afford the internet in order to share miss, please donate.\nAnother note: While shat I’ve shared above it’s rather bulking it is poetry. It’s a first draft with zero reworking in the next week, I’ll be working this to what i feel is the best version I can create \n\n\nHelp Keep Jack Alive\nThe link above gives you a ton of unique ways to help out memberships, products, commissions.\nMoonShadow Worldbuilding\nComing soon!! \n\nCourses consisting of one weekly email covering many subjects, and how to write about them.\n\n- Consulting in afternoon hours. 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[![](https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!UrJb!,w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F3362dbc9-7171-4f3f-a3f4-c3c5f5319627_704x1280.jpeg)](https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!UrJb!,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F3362dbc9-7171-4f3f-a3f4-c3c5f5319627_704x1280.jpeg) Kind of like poetry, but lacking the real beauty. This was inspired by by [this post](https://substack.com/@mshirley36/note/c-223164321%EF%BB%BF), by . I’m a sucker for inspiration, where ever it strikes. *** ### To your note on survival: Survival is not a goal. It's not a temporary condition. Surviving is the Rock bottom. It's the very least a human can do. If ever survival should be seen as a virtue, we are in dire times indeed. Oscar Wilde once said that patience was a virtue, only in those with no other. Survival is the same. Its only help is when you are crawling in the trenches or ditches. If we come to value survival and patience as worthy parts of life, we are already doomed. To be better. That is the only mandate laid upon a child, at the moment if birth. It is far from asking too much. It is the duty of each human, whether they live long, or die short, to be better. Better than those who came before us. There are so many who'd be content to occupy that same rung. The rung of their fathers. Stagnation is the killer of root and tradition. The desire to surpass, to be better, to grow, is never without its merit and its hardened times. [https://substack.com/@mshirley36/note/c-223164321](https://substack.com/@mshirley36/note/c-223164321) [Subscribe](https://exoteric1.substack.com/subscribe?utm_source=email&r=) I offer to teach poetry. To help make a child into a person who can cite odd verses in uncomfortable times. And make their own beautiful words, when they realize that all we have to pass on to the them is this; the very last form of nonphysical, nondigital expression. ##### ***The verse above, has not been edited. It is as it was as I typed it. I strongly recommend both my students as and my peers to never publish a first draft.*** ##### ***However, the fact that this rolled off my tongue, in that odd meter, is worthy of note.*** *** > I’d like to thank for providing the impetus for this piece, and also , for reminding me that the ability to create good verse was still within me. [Share](https://exoteric1.substack.com/p/we-are-more?utm_source=substack&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share&action=share) If you enjoyed this, or would just like to make sure I can afford the internet in order to share miss, please donate. Another note: While shat I’ve shared above it’s rather bulking it is poetry. It’s a first draft with zero reworking in the next week, I’ll be working this to what i feel is the best version I can create *** ## **[Help Keep Jack Alive](https://ko-fi.com/jacklhasa)** The link above gives you a ton of unique ways to help out memberships, products, commissions. [MoonShadow Worldbuilding](https://www.worldanvil.com/w/moonshadow-exoteric/) ### `Coming soon!!` - Courses consisting of one weekly email covering many subjects, and how to write about them. - \- Consulting in afternoon hours. Listed below\*. - \- and much more, very soon!! That’s my time! ### *I am Jack Lhasa* *You are Amazing*! 👊🏼👊🏼Solidarity👊🏼👊🏼 *** [Comment](https://exoteric1.substack.com/p/we-are-more/comments) \*Consulting is available in a large variety of subjects. For the rest of this week, I’m holding open office hours from 1pm to 5pm US Eastern time. Appointments range from 15min to 2hours, depending on topic and commitment. This week, all opening are for 15min so as to introduce new clients to how teleconsulting works ***Poets***: having any kind of trouble at all? Need a pro to review just before a reading? I am here to solve all your needs!! ***Fiction & Prose***: Consulting in larger projects takes more time and therefore costs more all of which would be reviewed during the first meeting. Consulting with an editor can take your manuscript from the editor’s trash to ready to sell. I also offer to to do these things with you, side by side this can build self-esteem, confidence, and more. Message me to schedule consultation. 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