--- type: "article" title: "Why Writing Fiction is So Challenging" summary: "Dissecting some of the headlines around a \"post-literate\" society; plus, a review of a small, New England town, and a modern retelling of \"The Great Gatsby\"" newsletter: "The Coffeehouse Creative" newsletter_handle: "the-coffeehouse-creative" newsletter_url: "https://usecommune.com/n/the-coffeehouse-creative" author: "Michael Dea (@michaelhdea)" published: "2026-07-27T11:15:00.000Z" canonical_url: "https://usecommune.com/n/the-coffeehouse-creative/a/why-writing-fiction-is-so-challenging" markdown_url: "https://usecommune.com/n/the-coffeehouse-creative/a/why-writing-fiction-is-so-challenging.md" chat_url: "https://usecommune.com/n/the-coffeehouse-creative/a/why-writing-fiction-is-so-challenging/chat" source_url: "https://coffeehousecreative.beehiiv.com/p/writingfictionchallenges" body_source: "imported" likes: 1 replies: 0 body_words: 1382 --- # Why Writing Fiction is So Challenging Recently, I have noticed an uptick in headlines talking about the massive decline in reading books. The main thesis of these articles seems to be that people are reading more than ever, but aren’t investing the time in books that deal with serious topics because of a general disinterest in the hard topics that people used to write about. A significant proportion of bestsellers seem to mirror this trend, because they lack some of the nuance and depth that English majors crave in their college courses, but this may have more to do with the fact that fiction is incredibly difficult to write than a lack of general interest in big questions. This difficulty stems from the fact that the desire to write fiction is fundamentally a really bad business decision. The publishing industry has become significantly consolidated over the decades, leaving a handful of large houses and a fragmented system of small indie, hybrid, and self-publishing presses that can help get stories out. The large publishers may have the most money to throw at promoting a book, but they often opt for sure-things, or as close as you can get to it in culture, rather than the risky, experimental stories that make readers uncomfortable initially. This means that writers just starting out feel the need to build platforms for themselves and their books by engaging on social media regularly, publishing newsletters, and running blogs so they have a built-in community that they believe traditional publishers would look favorably on when taking a manuscript from a relative unknown. As someone who has worked in marketing and run these kinds of campaigns for himself and the companies he works for, this is a full time job all its own. Social media strategy, blog management, and newsletter preparation aren’t things that happen quickly, especially if you want to do it well enough to get people engaged with your work, but despite the massive amount of effort it requires, it doesn’t necessarily pay off until you have a book to actually sell. When it comes to actually creating that book, an altogether different issue takes shape which has been the case as long as people have been writing stories: writing is hard. Psychologists, writing coaches, authors, publishing professionals, and many others have discussed why it’s hard to write in other corners of the Internet, and some likely discuss why fiction specifically is so difficult to write alongside it. One thing that I believe gets in the way of many writers is that kind of self-judgment that comes with being vulnerable with readers, because every author who has ever picked up a pen has found ways of distancing themselves from their identity as a writer to help them get words down on the page. It may feel counter-intuitive, but if a writer loves a story enough to want to create it in the first place, to pour blood, sweat, tears, and canceled social engagements into putting words on the page, they want to make sure they did it for a reason, that people will accept it. Believing that people will accept your work the way you hope they will is practically impossible when you’re a writer, because you find all kinds of examples of better works than yours, despite the fact that published authors have teams that work with them over years to get something ready for print. That comparison is both a form of self-sabotage and a form of self-protection, because if you know you’re not good enough to be published, you never try and never have to see someone reject your story. Ironically, that fear of rejection could be mitigated if we decided as a community to change the way that publishing operated. Having worked in the business world and studied organizational systems, I recognize that part of why people do business is so they can make money, and that’s likely never going to change. However, what can change is the perception of what’s valuable enough to invest in, and that will require reevaluating the strategy of the typical publishing house. It’s unlikely that we will see a mass change in the way we publish, but perhaps if enough people saw the value of novels differently, if enough people demanded a restructuring of the incentives behind which books get selected for promotion, then maybe the headlines won’t be so dire about the future of literacy. 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